my holiday
On the holiday me and my family was going to the zoo and my brother's was
mad at me because i pick it and i was happy but my mum and Dad was going
to tell of my brother's but i say no and my Dad tell me of and i got mad
and and we went back home .
And i went in my room and i went to play in my PC and i went outside to play
on my Dad pool tables and we went back to the zoo and we sod a lion but my brother's was very happy.
Hi my name is Katelyn and I go to Paroa school, maybe next time you could make the writing on the page so people can read it. In case you didn't know you used and twice in one sentence right next to each other. I can't wit to see more of your blog post.
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